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DOA - Dead On Arrival
« on: April 18, 2012, 06:57:53 AM »


''So be it, threaten no more, to secure peace is, to prepare for war''

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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2012, 07:23:49 AM »
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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #2 on: April 18, 2012, 07:37:21 AM »
Very interesting, keep going! :)

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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2012, 09:08:39 AM »
I shall be watching this topic with interest; keep it up mate

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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2012, 11:18:06 AM »
Those pistols are held very close to the officers' heads--is this intentional?

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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2012, 11:46:52 AM »
Those pistols are held very close to the officers' heads--is this intentional?

It was meant to look somewhat "perspectified" as if they had been freezeframed sweeping the pistol from left to right, checking for targets, but I can see what you mean.

I will remedy it for future poses though, so thankyou for pointing it out :)
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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #6 on: April 18, 2012, 01:14:32 PM »
Those pistols are held very close to the officers' heads--is this intentional?

It was meant to look somewhat "perspectified" as if they had been freezeframed sweeping the pistol from left to right, checking for targets, but I can see what you mean.

I will remedy it for future poses though, so thankyou for pointing it out :)
At the 15mm scale maybe one pixel of white space will fix them and give you the look you were going for.


Otherwise they look good so far. Looking forward to seeing the completed sheet.  :)
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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #7 on: April 19, 2012, 01:06:48 PM »
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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #8 on: April 19, 2012, 03:47:09 PM »
Loving the datapads.

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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #9 on: April 19, 2012, 09:34:25 PM »
Loving the datapads.
I agree, it gives the whole thing a special feel.  :)
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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #10 on: April 22, 2012, 03:08:33 AM »
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Re: DOA - Dead On Arrival
« Reply #11 on: April 22, 2012, 09:33:49 PM »
Beautiful newspaper, but do the troops have any left arms?